Livora Gracely

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Some tunes need more wobbles than wins before they sound this happy.


Mira had been practicing the accordion for eleven days, which was long enough for everyone in the house to develop an opinion.

The white cat approved.

This was encouraging until Mira discovered that the cat also approved of vacuum cleaners, thunderstorms, and an empty cardboard box.

Still, an audience was an audience.

Every afternoon, Mira put on her yellow bear hat, sat beside the sunny window, and practiced the same troublesome tune. The beginning behaved beautifully. The middle wandered into unfamiliar neighborhoods. The ending occasionally arrived before everyone else.

Mira kept playing.

Behind the old washbasin, two white mice had begun attending regularly. They brought cheese, which made their intentions difficult to classify. Were they music lovers having a snack, or cheese lovers tolerating the music?

Nobody asked.

On the twelfth afternoon, Mira reached the difficult part and missed three notes.

The cat opened one eye.

She tried again.

Four wrong notes.

Both eyes opened.

The mice stopped chewing.

Mira frowned at the accordion. Apparently, the instrument had been practicing too, but unfortunately it had chosen a different song.

She started again.

This time she did not chase the mistakes. She simply continued past them. One note stumbled, another arrived slightly crooked, and then something curious happened.

The difficult passage came.

Her fingers remembered.

The melody crossed the room without bumping into anything.

Mira stopped.

The cat looked disappointed.

Behind the basin, one mouse slowly lowered its cheese.

Mira played the passage again.

Perfect.

Then once more.

Perfect again.

She grinned and launched into the entire tune with such confidence that the cat closed its eyes and the mice resumed dinner.

The next afternoon, Mira returned to the window.

Same yellow hat. Same accordion. Same audience.

She opened the music book and began practicing the troublesome passage again.

The smaller mouse stared at the larger one.

They had apparently misunderstood the arrangement.

Success, it turned out, did not mean the concert was over.

It only meant tomorrow’s mistakes needed somewhere to begin.

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9 responses to “Practice in Progress”

  1. Peter Grey Avatar

    ‘It only meant tomorrow’s mistakes needed somewhere to begin.’ Those are wise words. When I was a child and I had a problem I often thought: I wish I was grown up. Then I would not have this problem anymore. And I was right. Little did I know….. 🙂

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Peter, adulthood does seem remarkably efficient at solving our childhood problems—mostly by replacing them with newer, better-dressed ones. 🙂 Perhaps that is why Mira keeps practicing even after the tune behaves: there is always another troublesome passage waiting politely in tomorrow’s music book.

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  2. xunholyanubisx Avatar

    This is absolutely lovely — it made me smile from beginning to end. There’s something so quietly profound about the way you’ve captured the messiness of practice and the strange beauty of having an audience that doesn’t care about perfection. The cat approving of everything, the mice with their ambiguous cheese, the accordion apparently practicing a different song — it all feels so alive and tender.

    What struck me most was the moment Mira kept going past the mistakes and the melody just… arrived. That’s such a true, honest depiction of how growth happens. Not by force, not by getting it right immediately, but by stubbornly showing up with a yellow hat and a willingness to sound terrible for a while.

    And that ending — perfection. Success meaning morrow’s mistakes just need somewhere to begin. That’s going to stay with me.

    Thank you for sharing this.

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Thank you, xunholyanubisx. You found the truest part of Mira’s practice: she did not defeat the wrong notes by chasing them; she simply kept the tune moving until her fingers remembered the way.

      I am especially glad you mentioned the yellow hat and her remarkably tolerant audience. The cat and mice seemed happiest while the music was still unpredictable—perfection may have improved the melody, but it briefly spoiled their entertainment. And perhaps that is why Mira returns the next afternoon: not because yesterday’s success meant nothing, but because it had given tomorrow’s crooked notes a kinder place to land.

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  3. SRIKANTH Avatar

    Carol, this is breathtaking. You’ve painted such a serene surface image, but the real magic lies in that quiet, haunting tension—the golden radiance above versus the dark, patient depths below. That closing line, “Holding roots the bloom forgets,” is profoundly moving. It speaks so eloquently to the hidden foundations that sustain us, even as we reach for the light. A truly stunning and thought-provoking piece.

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Srikanth, I wonder if this beautiful reflection may have wandered here from another page—the bloom, its roots, and the closing line you quoted do not appear in Mira’s accordion story. I only wanted to mention it gently in case the comment found the wrong window.

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  4. Aptivi Avatar

    Such a beautiful story, Livora 👍 I especially like the last line, they are very wise words.

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Thank you, Aptivi. I am glad those final words stayed with you. Mira discovered that one successful tune does not end the practice—it simply gives tomorrow’s wobbly notes a friendlier place to begin. 👍

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      1. Aptivi Avatar

        You’re most welcome, Livora. And that’s right 👍

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