Livora Gracely

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Some carried flowers. Others carried quiet moments.
Home always welcomed both with equal joy.


Grandma always chose the longest road.

No one had ever accused her of being lost.

She simply believed that flowers deserved to be greeted one at a time.

With one hand she pulled the little wooden pencil cart.

With the other she carried a bouquet that seemed to become more fragrant every time she stopped to smell it.

Grandpa rode behind her without the slightest complaint.

He wore his travelling coat, a wide hat, and a camera that rarely stayed quiet for long.

Click.

A sunflower bowing in the breeze.

Click.

Grandma smiling at a daisy as though they had met before.

Click.

The shadow of the little wooden pencil cart stretching across the lane.

The lane knew them well.

The baker always left enough room for the cart.

The sparrows hopped to the edge of the fence before it arrived.

Even the old dog beside the mill no longer opened one eye. Saturday had its own familiar sounds.

Near the bridge, a little girl raised her hand.

“Grandma?”

Grandma stopped.

“Why do you pull Grandpa?”

Grandma looked at the flowers.

Grandpa looked through his camera.

Neither answered.

A breeze wandered between them.

Then Grandpa quietly lifted his camera.

Click.

He showed the little girl the photograph.

It wasn’t the flowers.

It wasn’t the cart.

It wasn’t even Grandma.

It was Grandma’s hand holding the flowers while the other hand held the rope.

The little girl stared at the picture for a long moment.

“Oh.”

That was all she said.

The following Saturday, she came back carrying a tiny bunch of wildflowers.

No one noticed whether she smelled them.

Everyone noticed she walked much more slowly.

Grandma smiled but said nothing.

Grandpa took one photograph.

He never showed anyone that one.

After they disappeared around the bend, the little wooden pencil cart looked surprisingly empty without them, as though it had been waiting all week for exactly those two familiar hands to lead it home.

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15 responses to “The Scenic Route”

  1. Nguyα»…n Thα»‹ PhΖ°Ζ‘ng TrΓ’m Avatar

    beautiful ❀ some do carry quiet moments..

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Nguyα»…n, how lovely to see you here again. Yes, some people really do carry quiet moments, and I think Grandma understood that better than anyone on that road. Thank you for reading this one so gently.

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  2. Catherin J Pascal Dunk Avatar

    Wow, killer closing! I love the line about smiling at the daisy as if they’d met before

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    1. Catherin J Pascal Dunk Avatar

      I got a shock at the end!

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      1. Livora Gracely Avatar

        I like that the ending surprised you. I hoped it would feel quiet at first, then suddenly a little deeper once the photograph was understood.

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      2. Catherin J Pascal Dunk Avatar

        I’m still a little bit confused what happened, to be honest…but some ambiguity is good…makes the story or poem stay with you as you mull it over. What I think happened is that maybe they went home to heaven and the little girl took over…or maybe they were already in a ghost state and only the girl could see them?

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      3. Livora Gracely Avatar

        Catherin, I love that you are still mulling it over. Your heaven/ghost reading makes sense with the way the ending opens out, but the little key I had in mind was quieter: the girl realizes Grandpa is not simply being pulled like a burden. In the photograph, Grandma is holding beauty in one hand and care in the other. The next Saturday, when the girl brings wildflowers and walks more slowly, she has begun to understand the route Grandma was really taking. I still like leaving a little mist around β€œhome,” though.

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    2. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Catherin, thank you. That daisy line was one of those small stops Grandma would have insisted on making. I am so glad the closing stayed with you too.

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  3. Aptivi Avatar

    Sometimes, those quiet moments are the greatest moments. Nice ending and a beautifully written story πŸ‘β˜ΊοΈ

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Thank you, Aptivi. Yes, sometimes the quiet moments are the ones that keep the whole road beautiful. I am happy the ending reached you warmly.

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      1. Aptivi Avatar

        My pleasure, Livora ☺️

        Have a wonderful day and weekend!

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  4. revdamanda Avatar
    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Thank you, revdamanda. I am so glad this little road felt beautiful to you.

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  5. atimetoshare.me Avatar
    atimetoshare.me

    So sweet. Being the grandma that I am, this touched my heart today.

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      That means a lot. Coming from a grandma, this feels especially tender to me. I think Grandma would be very happy to know her slow little road touched your heart today.

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