Livora Gracely

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Part 5 — The Gates Open

The guards did not believe them at first.

Four men who lived outside the wall
were not trusted to carry news for the city.

But hunger listens differently.

So the king sent horses.

Not many.
Just enough to see if hope was lying.

The riders followed the road.

They found clothing scattered along the way.
Cloaks.
Weapons.
Silver dropped in haste.

Fear had run faster than soldiers.

The riders returned.

“It is true,” they said.

And something inside the city broke loose.

The gates opened.

People ran.

Not walked.
Ran.

Mothers.
Merchants.
Children.
Old men who had not hurried in years.

They ran past the place where the officer stood.

He had laughed at tomorrow.

Now tomorrow rushed past him like a river.

Flour was sold cheaply.
Barley cost almost nothing.

Just as the prophet had said.

There was more than enough.

More than four men could eat.
More than a city could finish.

Bread for weeks.
For months.

And yet —

The officer saw it all.

He saw the sacks of grain.
He saw the hands filled with food.
He saw the market alive again.

But he did not taste it.

The crowd pressed forward.
Too many feet.
Too much hunger.

And he was trampled at the gate.

He had seen tomorrow.

He had not believed it.

“How did it get so late so soon?”
— Dr. Seuss

The city that had eaten hope
now tasted abundance.

The four men stood somewhere in the noise.

No one lifted them on shoulders.
No one built them statues.

They had simply walked.

And when they found bread,
they had spoken.

Tomorrow had once sounded impossible.

Until someone stepped toward it.


If You Hear It First

At the beginning, there was a question.

Can you taste tomorrow?

The city could not.
Hunger had trained its ears to distrust hope.

The officer could not.
Reason had taught him that skies do not open for flour.

The four men did not know they were carrying anything important.
They only knew they were hungry enough to move.

And yet —

Bread waited in tents before anyone believed it.
Abundance stood quietly while doubt argued.

It was not strength that found the feast.
It was movement.

It was not wisdom that first recognized good news.
It was conscience.

“This is a day of good news. We are not doing right.”

Four men outside the gate understood something the city inside had forgotten.

Good news is not proven by applause.
It is proven by sharing.

And disbelief does not always shout.
Sometimes it smiles politely and says, “That cannot be.”

The city ran when proof arrived.

The officer saw when it was too late.

The four men spoke before they were asked.

“If ever there is tomorrow when we’re not together… remember you are braver than you believe.”
— A.A. Milne

Tomorrow did come.

For some, it tasted like bread.

For one, it remained only a sight.

And so the question waits again —

If good news came through someone you do not expect…
would you listen?

If abundance stood just beyond your doubt…
would you step toward it?

If you were the first to find it…
would you hide it?

The gate is open.

What happens next
has always depended
on who is willing
to believe before tasting.

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14 responses to “Curiosity’s Unlocked Teeth”

  1. rothpoetry Avatar

    This is one of the great stories of the Bible!

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      It truly is a remarkable story — one that keeps unfolding no matter how many times we return to it. Thank you for reading it here with us.

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        You are welcome! :>)

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  2. G.W. Avatar

    I was sorry not to find a citation for this, one of my favorite stories from the OT.
    2 Kings 7:2-20 🙏

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Thank you for adding the reference — yes, it is drawn from 2 Kings 7:2–20. I left the citation unmarked intentionally, hoping the story could be received first as a lived moral movement before being located as a text. I appreciate your love for the original passage and the care you bring to it.

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      1. G.W. Avatar

        Oh, I see. I knew you are too precise to forget it. Yours was a good plan, Livora. 🌝

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  3. SRIKANTH Avatar

    This is beautiful — a meditation on belief, movement, and the strange ways hope arrives. The four men weren’t heroes in the grand story; they were just hungry enough to walk when others wouldn’t. Sometimes that’s all it takes — one small step toward the unbelievable.

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      That smallness is part of the beauty here — hunger moving before certainty. They were not grand, only willing. I’m grateful you noticed that quiet courage.

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  4. Aarav Avatar

    Wow 😬🦷 that’s wild and fascinating! 🤯📖

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Sometimes the story feels almost unbelievable until it unfolds. I’m glad it caught your attention.

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  5. Iosif Avatar
    Iosif

    ,,Taste and see that the Lord is good! Blessed is the man who trusts in him!”

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      That verse brings the story full circle — from seeing to tasting. In the end, abundance is not only witnessed; it must be received. Thank you for placing that reminder here.

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  6. Vijay Srivastava Avatar

    This is deeply stirring and beautifully resolved.
    “It was not strength that found the feast. It was movement.” that truth lingers long after the last line.
    A powerful reminder that belief, courage, and generosity often arrive through the least expected hands.

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      You drew out the heartbeat of the story — movement before certainty. Strength was never the turning point; willingness was. I appreciate how you let that truth stand without embellishment.

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