Livora Gracely

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The skateboard had four wheels.


The young leopard trusted approximately three of them.

He pushed off anyway.

For the first few meters, everything went beautifully.

The path was smooth, the afternoon warm, and the white fence slipped past in a pleasant blur. His scarf fluttered behind him with enough confidence to suggest that at least one member of the outfit knew what it was doing.

He grinned.

Then the board wobbled.

His left arm shot out.

His right followed.

His tail swung dramatically in the opposite direction, apparently promoted without warning to emergency steering equipment.

The board straightened.

“Oh!”

He laughed.

That had worked.

A little farther ahead came a gentle bend.

He leaned.

The skateboard leaned.

His ears leaned.

For one alarming second, the entire leopard seemed to be negotiating separately with gravity.

One sneaker lifted.

Two paws stretched wide.

The tail made another executive decision.

And somehow—

he remained upright.

His laugh grew louder.

This was becoming interesting.

He had watched older skaters glide through the park as though balance were something they had been born carrying in their pockets. Their feet seemed certain. Their turns looked effortless.

His did not.

His balance arrived late, left early, and occasionally required assistance from his tail.

But each wobble taught his body something the last one had not.

Push.

Roll.

Lean.

Recover.

Laugh.

Again.

By the time he reached the palms, he was no longer trying to look like the skaters he had watched.

He was simply riding.

The board rolled faster.

His arms opened wide—not from panic this time, but because the breeze felt wonderful there.

For several glorious seconds, everything aligned: paws, wheels, tail, road.

Then one wheel found a tiny pebble.

The skateboard twitched.

His eyes widened.

His tail went left.

His body went right.

His dignity considered leaving altogether.

He recovered at the very last moment and continued rolling.

The young leopard burst out laughing.

He had not mastered balance.

But somewhere between nearly falling and staying upright, he had stopped being afraid of losing it.

Ahead, the path curved again.

He bent his knees.

His grin returned.

Four wheels entered the turn.

This time, he trusted all of them.

Mostly.

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10 responses to “Young Heart, Wild Balance”

  1. Catherin J Pascal Dunk Avatar

    I love that bit about his scarf knowing what it was doing lol. How do you get your inspiration…a leopard cub riding a skateboard?! And there’s always an underlying lesson, which is nice

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    1. atimetoshare.me Avatar
      atimetoshare.me

      So sweet. Lessons in perseverance and overcoming obstacles. I could envision the little cub as he pressed on.

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      1. Livora Gracely Avatar

        The little cub kept wobbling forward until perseverance began to look almost like play. I’m glad you could see him pressing on.

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    2. Livora Gracely Avatar

      That scarf arrived with more confidence than the leopard had, so the story nearly wrote its own entrance. I enjoy placing an unlikely creature in an ordinary moment and then watching a small truth emerge through the wobble—in this case, progress becoming less about perfect balance and more about staying with the ride.

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  2. G.W. Avatar

    “This time, he trusted all of them.

    Mostly.”
    Yes. Trust is always an iffy proposition. LOL

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Exactly, G.W. Even after the wheels have earned our confidence, it seems wise to leave a little room for the pebble.

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  3. nihshabdblog Avatar

    Such a cute and fun little journey! 😄🛹 Loved the ending “mostly” trusting all four wheels made me smile. 🦋✨

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Thank you, Rajeshwari. This little journey kept its balance just long enough to remain fun—and “mostly” seemed the most honest promise a young leopard could make on four wheels. I’m glad the ending made you smile.

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  4. SRIKANTH Avatar

    What a wonderfully vivid and joyful ride! You painted every wobble, every tail-assisted recovery, and every moment of dawning confidence with such life and humor. I love how the leopard doesn’t just learn to skate—he learns to enjoy the near-falls, the negotiation with gravity, and even his own ungraceful moments. The line about his dignity considering leaving altogether is pure gold. And that final turn, where he trusts mostly—that’s the most honest, delightful kind of progress. Absolutely charming storytelling, Livora. 🐆🛹✨

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    1. Livora Gracely Avatar

      Thank you, Srikanth. The leopard’s tail had to accept a promotion it never applied for, while his dignity kept threatening resignation. I’m glad the final “mostly” felt honest to you—the kind of progress that still leaves room for wobbling, laughter, and another turn.

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